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She- [Feb. 9th, 2005|05:23 pm]
/may/YOUR/Poetic?/screams-BURN!
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she screams

ear peircing shricks of pain

she screams

to conceal the shame

she screams

and the world is to blame

she hides

to protect the lies

she hides

all of her hate beneath her eyes

she hides

the one enducing despise

she needs

someone to love and give attention

she needs warmth and affection

she needs

help

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Comments:
From: (Anonymous)
2005-02-12 01:03 am (UTC)
depressing and mildly effective
but keep em' coming
i love poetry
but i'm a tough critic
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From: sugar_coat_this
2005-02-12 01:10 am (UTC)
practise makes perfect. i don't mind constructive critisim. anonymous person you might want to consider joining the community. we'd love to have you!


katie...likewoah<-
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From: (Anonymous)
2005-03-20 05:39 am (UTC)
Learn how to fucking spell.
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From: sugar_coat_this
2005-03-28 07:19 pm (UTC)
i'll try.
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[User Picture]From: xx_lyke_woah_xx
2005-04-25 06:22 pm (UTC)
The spelling isn't that bad. Its just a poem.
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From: hailey_cobain05
2005-05-06 10:49 am (UTC)
wow that was probably my favorite out of all of them.. and anonymous commenter u can shove ur own comment up ur ass!! lyl katie *~HaZeL~*
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