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Love Me Like This- [Feb. 11th, 2005|07:16 pm]
/may/YOUR/Poetic?/screams-BURN!
dealthbypoetry
[sugar_coat_this]
[sanity level... |confusedcorn-fused]
[heart screaming.. |hawthorne heights]

tears roll down her cheeks

stinging her skin with their fury and self torment

although they sparkle like stars

inside they are black

black, as the night sky hugging them in place

her mind wonders she realizes

she is so unlike the stars

no one is there to hold her in place

no one is around to care

her heart that was once filled with love and kindness

has withered away feeling lost, lonely,drirry, inadequat,

she drownds slowly into an ocean of dispare

"guide me through the darkness" she pleeds, crawling into a ball

why wont you love me

striving for affection

longing to be noticed

she grabs on to anything that can be held

he takes her hand suddenly the world isn't so bad

the storm clouds are swept away

and the warmth of the sun tickles her heart

sky blue eyes sparkling like never before

rose red cheeks blushing for the world to admiror

now rather then envying the stars

they have become her dance floor

love me like this

why wont you love me like this
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Comments:
From: (Anonymous)
2005-02-12 06:52 pm (UTC)
i never did understand poetry. but i like the layout to the journal. how did you get that background?


-Sarah
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From: sugar_coat_this
2005-02-12 08:34 pm (UTC)
Dear Sarah,

I made the background myself. Which isn't saying much because it was SOOOO easy! I hope you enjoy coming to this community and you should definitly join! I just made this community and I really want it to last! With your support I could keep this little journal up and running! I encourage you to join and ALL of your friends. Poetry isn't hard to understand when your emotional enough. Your feelings just flow and then the words appear on the paper. Its very releasing you should try it sometime. Come back with a poem or more opinoins on the poetry posted. THANKX!

Katie...likewoah<-
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From: (Anonymous)
2005-02-13 12:17 am (UTC)
i'm not going to join.
i don't even have a live journal.
but good look with your new community..



-Sarah
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From: sugar_coat_this
2005-02-13 01:42 am (UTC)

Cry For Help!

alrighty then.
anyone out there have a community already and they want to help me out? i don't know what i'm doing! obviously hehe... so ya.


Cry For Help,
Katie...likewoah<-
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[User Picture]From: luvme_like_this
2005-02-13 03:13 am (UTC)
i keep trying to post a poem in here but it wont work! why the hell isn't this fucker worker katie?


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